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You made me smile and laugh
You made me want to be better
To run farther,
To love harder
You made me love to fall
I wanted to be the one to hold you
I want to tell you I love you
I want to kiss you in the rain
Sometimes it burns
Every time I think of you
The pain, the boredom they stop
And suddenly I'd be content to lie still for awhile
If only I could feel your heart against mine.
I'm not a good person,
And this isn't a good poem,
I don't always speak the truth,
But this time it's true:
I love you.
Fuck I actually wrote her a love poem
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lovemereally15 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
when you said "fuck I actually wrote her a love poem" I wanted to say to u in person "love makes you do crazy things"
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fireyfreedom Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun :)
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lovemereally15 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no probz!.
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TheRandomThings Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg thats soo sweet i bet she loved it! its one of the better ones ive read in a while <3 so cute lol
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fireyfreedom Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She never saw it.  That was sort of the whole point.
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NinaV521 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Very Sweet :)
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fireyfreedom Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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scooby25611 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this. Made me "Awww". It's really a beautiful piece of writing. ^^
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fireyfreedom Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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scooby25611 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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